Angel

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I AM IN HEAVEN WHEN YOU HOLD ME TIGHT
I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY MIGHT
THERE ISNT A WORD DEEP ENOUGH TO TELL YOU HOW DEEPLY I LOVE YOU
I JUST KNOW IN MY HEART FOR YOU IT WILL ALWAYS BE TRUE
YOU ARE A BLESSING THAT GOD SENT TO ME
BABY PLEASE TELL ME WE ARE ALWAYS MEANT TO BE
THERE IS NOTHING I WOULDNT DO FOR YOU
THERE ISNT ENOUGH MILES ON THIS EARTH THAT COULD EVER KEEP ME FROM YOU
THERE ISNT A MOUNTAIN TOO HIGH OR A WIDE ENOUGH SEA
I HOPE THAT YOU KNOW HOW MUCH MY ANGEL YOU MEAN TO ME
FOR YOU I WOULD GO THROUGH HELLS HOTTEST FIRE
BABY YOU ARE MY ONE AND ONLY BURNING DESIRE
YOU ARE PERFECT IN EVERY SINGLE WAY
I KNOW I WILL ALWAYS BE THE MAN IN LOVE WITH YOU THIS LOVE WILL NEVER STRAY
BABY ON THE COLD NIGHTS I PROMISE TO KEEP YOU WARM
I WILL ALWAYS PROTECT YOU AND KEEP YOU FROM HARM
IT WOULD BE THE GREATEST MIRACLE AND BLESSING THE DAY YOU BECOME MY WIFE
FOR YOU I GIVE ALL MY NEVERENDING LOVE AND ETERNAL LIFE
MY SWEET ANGEL TO PROVE TO YOU THIS LOVE IS TRUE
I WILL DO ANYTHING YOU WANT ME TOO

I wrote this poem for my gf.

[commonsense]

kudos for trying to write a poem but its not so much a poem as garbled stream of conscienceness, I was going to post why youre poem isnt good but instead I will just say good try but next time focus more on making it flow than having the ending rhyme, a good piece of prose is better than a crappy poem, also you cant rhyme you with you.

ALSO Please dont lay off the caps lock, in typing if you put all caps its equivalent to you yelling and you dont yell a love poem.
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I think it is good~