another picture i made with photoshop (:

[freakazoidx3]

i loved the feedback i got from my other topic "a picture i made with photoshop" & i worked more on photoshop & got this picture (:
its one of my faves, & i used a lot of brushes on this & it took me 1hour to make this so more feedback pleasee.

[img:e213158b77]http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8744/lindseycg5.png[/img:e213158b77]
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[ClickFanatic]

For a decorated photo it's quite cool. The sketchy items make good decoration, but the text is somehow not very interesting. The edges are too sharp for a graphic with a sketchy style. And the brightness behind the letter Y makes it harder to see in comparison with the other letters.
Perhaps you could improve the letters by drawing sketchy lines along the edges (I guess the colour you used for the fluttery things near the S can be used for that).
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[drath]

I'll go ahead and agree with ClickFanatic on the point of the text. I love everything about it except the text. It's not the font itself or anything, I think the edges just need to be blended a little better to match the overall feeling of the rest of it (sketchy). Otherwise it's pretty decent, and I big improvement over the other picture you showcased.
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[coralvalley]

I think you did a good job with it over all as you can see that you put a lot of work into it and I applaud you for doing that. I will admit that while I like the image there is something about the hearts on her cheek that do not sit right with me. It is not that they are not good because I can clearly see what you are trying to do with the image, but perhaps a bit of a rotation on them or something might enhance the image a bit. Of course that is just my personal preference and I think that is open to subjective opinions to say the least. I liked the colors that you used and thought it was certainly an eye catcher and that you did a nice job with it. I would, however, tweak with the text a little bit and see if perhaps you could do something a little bit different to make it stand out a little bit more even if it means adding a border or a shadow or maybe even a glow to get it to stand out a little bit more on the bottom. Other than that you did a really good job and I think that you should be pleased with your work. It was pretty good and thanks for posting your work and sharing it with us. I always enjoy seeing what graphic artists come up with in their works.