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Swordude Chickenbutt

Joined: 01 Dec 2004 Posts: 1716 Location: Elk River, Minnesnota
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charvi Master Poster

Joined: 15 Jun 2006 Posts: 182
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Hmm, it's looks okay as it is right now. Only comment is that I imagined Cloud Strife from Advent Children to be more of a purple or blue color (instead of yellow, orange and red), but that's simply my opinion. Other than that, it's pretty good.
Also, I like the scratch effect in the background; it seems like sword marks or something, so it really does fit your name. _________________ [img:7c4b7f7171]http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs15/f/2007/101/7/5/Haku_by_pyrogas.jpg[/img:7c4b7f7171] |
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drath D

Joined: 27 Sep 2005 Posts: 1680 Location: Canada
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I think the biggest thing that bothers me about is the overall quality of the background effects and source image. It seems they are very blurred and distorted (perhaps from filters used), contrasted against a really crisp text. If you want to the somewhat distorted feeling in the image you are making, go even further so it looks like it was on purpose, rather than just a really bad source image or something.
The composition is somewhat also strange. Lots of the effects are covering his face and distorting his face (the most important element in the signature). Sure this can be good, depending on how you do it; unfortunately I don't think it's working here very well. Perhaps if his skin tone matched the rest of the background (putting a color overlay over his face) it would work better.
Sorry for the mostly negative critique on this one, it's just that I like some of your older stuff better than this, including your other new signature: http://www.lifelesspeople.com/.....hp?t=45468 . Besides "looks good" is boring anyways . _________________ [img:941f13b8ba]http://thegamersjournal.com/newsig.gif[/img:941f13b8ba]
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wellingtonboots Lifeless Person

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Ayana Master Poster
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DAaron Master Poster

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