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Darkness Falls

 
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marshall
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Joined: 06 May 2005
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Location: California

PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:46 am    Post subject: Darkness Falls Reply with quote

Darkness Falls

Strange things appear
On my random thoughts
Knights and demons
They would always fought
My thoughts would wonder
To where would it lead?
An endless possiblity
Of you what I need

Soulful and sin
In a mind so plain
When will it end?
When will it change?
The answer isn't there
It's too far to reach
I'm like a student
For you to teach

Nonsense and confuse
You've read my phrase
Sharp as an angle
When lines arris
Darkness the cloud
Storming the weather
Waiting right here
To when I'll meet her

Still foggy in my mind
Needs time to clear
My darkness disappear
As soon she step near
To hear her words
Would clear these thoughts
She is the target
That hits my spot

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cherii
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Joined: 30 Jul 2005
Posts: 173


PostPosted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 1:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Some of the lines don't make sense. However, it seems like a poem full of action and adventure. It's a bit of a confusing poem that makes so many images come to your mind. It is a very nice poem, if those things I said were fixed, it would be so cool!
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marshall
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wrote this out of confusion. So some of it doesn't seem to make sense.
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Maxwell
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 1:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Although it make no sense it cool Very Happy
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