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marshall Grandmaster Poster

Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 289 Location: California
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 10:46 am Post subject: Darkness Falls |
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Darkness Falls
Strange things appear
On my random thoughts
Knights and demons
They would always fought
My thoughts would wonder
To where would it lead?
An endless possiblity
Of you what I need
Soulful and sin
In a mind so plain
When will it end?
When will it change?
The answer isn't there
It's too far to reach
I'm like a student
For you to teach
Nonsense and confuse
You've read my phrase
Sharp as an angle
When lines arris
Darkness the cloud
Storming the weather
Waiting right here
To when I'll meet her
Still foggy in my mind
Needs time to clear
My darkness disappear
As soon she step near
To hear her words
Would clear these thoughts
She is the target
That hits my spot _________________ Anime Fever Come and join |
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cherii Master Poster
Joined: 30 Jul 2005 Posts: 173
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 1:07 am Post subject: |
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| Some of the lines don't make sense. However, it seems like a poem full of action and adventure. It's a bit of a confusing poem that makes so many images come to your mind. It is a very nice poem, if those things I said were fixed, it would be so cool! |
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marshall Grandmaster Poster

Joined: 06 May 2005 Posts: 289 Location: California
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:46 pm Post subject: |
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I wrote this out of confusion. So some of it doesn't seem to make sense. _________________ Anime Fever Come and join |
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Maxwell Novice Poster

Joined: 25 Jul 2005 Posts: 39
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 1:46 am Post subject: |
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Although it make no sense it cool  |
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