Dream, Explore, Maintain.

M0ose · Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 10:17 am Post subject: Dream, Explore, Maintain.

The three pieces tell a short story of my current life. I have dreamed, and now I begin to explore. But will I ever be able to truly maintain?

Three things that us as human beings have, and will always try to do. We have all dreamed of becoming something greater then ourselves, and though that we have begun to explore. Once we reach the point on our journey where we can finally live, we must maintain.

Enjoy, and comments are always welcomed.

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Dream.

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Explore.

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Maintain.
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Desbrina · Jadeite Joined: 11 Jun 2005 Posts: 2958 Location: Earth

They look good, but the text on the second one (explore) looks like its been squashed up in the corner
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M0ose · Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 3:40 pm Post subject:

Yeah, I thought that myself. The only way I could have really gotten past that was to use either a different front, or a larger size, but making it fit elsewhere was a pain.
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DAaron · Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:54 am Post subject:

Hey These Are Very Nice Dream is the best one there nice colours nice text.
Explore is a wired the text looks a bit dull on the left side looks like you drawed the text in.
maintain is good the text has room for improvement
the borders good
Moose out of all the pieces i have seen from you its only your text that needs the biggest improvement.
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M0ose · Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 12:12 pm Post subject:

DAaron · Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 12:14 pm Post subject:

Yer I Found text When i started all i can say is read tutorials on text and good luck by the way a good website for tutoirals is www.pixel2life.com
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drath · D Joined: 27 Sep 2005 Posts: 1680 Location: Canada

1) Probably the best one on your list. Not too much to say about it though. It just works the best visually, although I think it would work better if it was about 1/3 height it is now, then adding a bit more to the width. In other words it looks too much like a square format.

2) Weird colors, weird image and the text is very awkward. Vertical text has and will never work in graphics, i've only seen it done well in high-design and expensive advertising.

3) I like the border used here. I think the text awkwardness is destroying the overall graphic here again (like number 2). It's just too close to the border line, it's very distracting.

Again, there's my very critical review Smile

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marinaroz · Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:25 pm Post subject:

Those are cool. I especially like the second sig, the colors and composition is very fitting. It looks vibrant and restless.

The third sig looks calming and quiet and defined, I like that one too.

I don't much like the first sig, though. Pink is a tough color to handle, and the whole thing looks too much like a piece of bubblegum to be taken seriously.
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