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marshall
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 2:33 pm    Post subject: Empty Dream Reply with quote

Empty Dream

Drops of rain
On a stormy night
The wind of shadow
Gives me such fright
Tug myself to bed
I went to sleep
Promises all the things
That I said I'll keep

Dream of you
Appear in front of my face
You ran away
I then would chase
To where you go
and where you'll be
To be in reach
Right next to me

Lifeless you look
You start to float
Reaching out my hand
I caught your coat
It's all I have
When you disappear
If I have one wish
I'll wish you'll near

It's all a dream
That happen in my mind
To stop the future
And rewind the time
Impossible it is
As you can see
You're no longer around
It's only me


Marshall -7-25-05

Please excuse my grammar. Any fix or correction is appreciated. Smile
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cherii
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Posts: 173


PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 7:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That poem was quite nice.

Quote:
Lifeless you looks


could just be...

Quote:
Lifeless you look


You used the right emotions in the poem too!
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marshall
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 05, 2005 10:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks. I just fixed it.
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