Exploding Apples Issue 1

[Swordude]

This is the first issue of an online story i'm doing for my website.

It was Thurday, Jason was walking in the halls, about ready to go home from another day in the 10th grade when he was stopped, Aaron asked him, "Hey Jason, i'm having a party tommorow, want to come?" Jason was surprised, he ussualy never got invited to parties so he was very excited. He replied, "Sure Thing" and then went home to tell his mother. He arrived home, his mother noticed the grin on his face, she asked, "What is that smile for honey?" He replid, "I got invited to my first party!" His mom was very excited, she always felt bad for Jason being an outcast. She said to him, "That is great! I hope you have fun!" Jason hurried upstairs to pick out something to wear for the upcoming night. He went to bed early so he wouldn't look stupid leaving the party early to go to bed.

The next day at school was awkward, his old friends were'nt talking to him, he figured they were just jealous and forgot about them. He got home and got ready for 7:00, the time of the party. Jason wasn't old enough to drive and felt embarrased when his dad dropped him off but he just shook it off. He got inside to see people drinking and acting like monkeys, he felt weird but he stuck around. The whole night turned out bad, nobody even wanted to talk to Jason, he just sat on the couch watching everyone have a good time until about 11 when he decided to go home, he called his house but no answer, he called both of his parents cellphones but no answer. He became worried, after trying a few more times he decided to walk, it was raining and it was about a 40 minute walk.

When he arrived home the front door was open, he walked inside and noticed the kitchen looked like a tornado went through, the refridgerator was left open, all the foods gone. The cupboards were open also, again all canned goods and chips were gone, along with the snacks. He looked at the counter to see one thing, an apple, a nice red apple, he thought it looked good, he went over to take a bite. He picked it up and he felt a shock as it got closer to his mouth and he dropped it. He stepped back luckily because 5 seconds later the apple exploded, it was completly gone and left a huge smoke cloud. Jason was confused but he knew what was going on.

He knew that the strike of a sick, twisted killer was about to happen. His name, Jack Apple. He sets bombs inside apples and the bomb is triggered 5 seconds after human skin has touched it. It was then that he realized his destiny, he needed to get rid of Jack Apple... For Good.

More info at www.explodingapples.l2p.net

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