Friendly Fire

[taitanojt0]

Ok, Im not a good writer and this is the only thing Ive written outside of a school assignment so I need some advice. Im trying to make it into a song, but its missing something. Here it is:

(The "-----" means to go up and sing it again with the words in the "()" this time)

Friendly Fire:

You shoot me down,
you patch me up,
you look into my eyes.

You say "Everythings going to be just fine."

I wake up,
I call for help,
But your not there,

I begin to wonder what happened.
(I still dont realize what happened.)

Later on,
I find you,
But you've changed.

Your not at all how you used to be.
(Your not the person you used to be.)

You are gone,
Im all alone,
All alone.

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Remember the days when we used to be in love.
Those days are so far away now, they meant so much to me.
Will it ever be the same again? Can we ever be again?
Will we fall in love again? We can fall in love again!

You shot me down,
You patched me up,
You looked into my eyes.

and You said "Everythings going to be just fine."

Somehow I dont think your right this time.
I wish everything would be just fine.

But somehow I still wish you were right...

...this time.
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[Megalomaniac]

That is funny I didn't get anything =) Sorry !