Girl_5

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Working on the next, it's not another girl.

[Du57y]

It looks like you're really good at using photoshop brushes. I think the background is very very nice and from what I know of your work, very different. The close up blurry plant thing is also neat neat to. K so I really like the dark hair, it's nearly very silhouette or something, I do like the body and the shading. I appreciate that you put colour into it. Nice colour sensitivity with the sky background.

There's a couple minor details with it though, like where the thighs actually connect to the torso, or how proportionately on a human being, when the arms are straight on the sides the tip of the fingers match the center of the thigh. Her torso looks far too long to have that be possible. I really dislike the face though, I think the way it's shaded on the top is weird, if you're line drawing this picture like you are, there should be more closure on her cheek, where the bottom lip connects to the chin. Her entire profile, in fact, bothers me. Usually when I look at a person in profile, right in front of the eyebrows is usually like .. a corner, not a rounded edge. If you look up a persons profile you can also see the eyebrow goes nearly right up the to edge of the profile. Then there's the obvious problem with her left boob ... I can do that but it's on purpose and if I had to sit like that it'd hurt. Her shoulders look a bit weird, I can accept that she's broad shouldered and so her right shoulder would seem very long ... but her hair covers up all the confusion for the left shoulder. I did try to simply hold this position to seem how easy she makes it look, I can kind of hold it, I couldn't get my hand to face that way, and we are not ancient Egyptian drawings of profile face and front chest. It's amazing how easy drawings can make unnatural positions look easy and comfortable

Here's one I just noticed, if you actually look at the distance between her eye and her ear you should realize that seems a bit too far. And in that case when I look at her head I can see it's weird and too long. Her hair is also very very unnatural. If it were an obvious movement her hair would be behind her back, since her hair is to cover up her breast it would be the hair on her right side would come over in some way, it shouldn't just be straight from the back of her head straight down because her head is that way.

And I guess that's all I have to say

*one more thing, directly left of her belly button right inside the line you can see she's missing a chunk of her skin ... ya k bye.
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[Camilu]

I believe that of all those that I saw, this was the best one, most complex, has like more life, when having a bottom, in this case trees and that, however the others when having an able abstract bottom that did not give as much life him to the drawing. Very good Ta the combination of colors, to the being warm colors still gives more life him

[drath]

Well on a first glance, not looking at any detail, this looks pretty good. Very nice and calming, nice tones and colors, a cool modern background. But then once you look closer it reveals some fatal flaws which I will list.

First of all, her body/torso is too long. Look how long her chest is! The breasts only add to the confusion. They are very awkward and not natural looking (well possibly natural to a 80 year old woman wiggling around). They are waaaaaay too low on her torso. Her disfigurement doesn't stop there though. Look at her ear in conjunction to her face. It's almost on the back of her head! But hey, at least your shading is improving .

Anyways, besides the actual body/figure, I think the most successful part of this picture is the background. It's very lovely and detailed (even if simplified by brushes).
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