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sk8ar
www.poglej.net SLOVENIA
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Location: Slovenia --> near Ljubljana
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 Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:20 am Post subject: Help me correcting mistakes in text |
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Can you please help me to correct all mistakes in this text:
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Company's sale is oriented in complexed market. We have equiped a complex of tenement houses in Moscow.
Hotel
Hotels in highlands of worldwide known ski areas are equiped with our products.
Variety of materials, high developed technology and possibility of decorative additions are making production of different products possible.
Quality colors that are environment friendly give you a long term protection of our products which have years of guarantee.
Different color casts make creative arhitecture and new atractive possibilities.
Notranja oprema – furniture
Modern touristic settlements at Croatian shore are equiped with shutters, that fit the enivronment there.
Windows in combination of wood and aluminium are a perfect solution for demending buyers.
RUSSIA –NORTH -EAST
An excelent thermal and sound insulation makes possible building in windows in all climate circumstances.
Production complex and offices are located in center of Logatec. We have representatives in other countries that are distributing our products all over the world.
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Berticus
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| Quote: | Company's sale is oriented in a complex market. We have equiped a complex of tenement houses in Moscow.
Hotel
Hotels in highlands of worldwide known ski areas are equiped with our products.
Variety of materials, highly developed technology and possibility of decorative additions, are making production of different products possible.
Quality colors, that are environment friendly, give you a long term protection of our products, which have years of guarantee.
Different color casts make creative arhitecture and new attractive possibilities.
Notranja oprema – furniture
Modern touristic settlements at Croatian shore are equiped with shutters that fit the enivronment there.
Windows, in combination of wood and aluminium, are a perfect solution for demanding buyers.
RUSSIA –NORTH -EAST
An excellent thermal and sound insulation makes building in windows in all climate circumstances possible.
Production complex and offices are located in center of Logatec. We have representatives in other countries who distribute our products all over the world. |
I'd also suggest having better word choice. There's too many "products" in there. See if you can fit in different words here and there, such as "line" or "merchandise." |
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sk8ar
www.poglej.net SLOVENIA
Joined: 08 Dec 2004
Posts: 868
Location: Slovenia --> near Ljubljana
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Ok thank you very much 
I just wanna know if Production complex is what I mean it is. The place where products are being made... ?
Ok I also need help with this:
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From tradition with love
We are specialized in producing high quality
windows and front doors which are made
with love to wood and with it contemporary production,
simple setting, making by order, saving on energy and
fast delivery time.
Experiences, constant car for technologica development and
better and better quality of our products are making us
succesfull producers of doors and windows.
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Please change "bad" words with good ones... Oh and how do you say dooes and windows in one word ? is it like: building furniture ? |
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Magpie
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Joined: 22 Apr 2005
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Location: Yorkshire
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From tradition with love
We specialize in producing high quality
windows and front doors which are made
with love from wood but using contemporary production processes. Advantages include simple setting, making to order, savings on energy and fast delivery time.
Our wealth of experience, constant and ongoing technological development and
the high quality of our products are making us
successful manufacturers of doors and windows. |
| Sk8ar wrote: | | ...Oh and how do you say doors and windows in one word ? is it like: building furniture ? |
There isn't a collective noun for doors and windows so just refer to them separately.
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PrincessJennifer
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Joined: 10 Jun 2006
Posts: 23
Location: Toronto, Canada
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Here you go. I switched some of the words as well, to make it a little less dull. No offence though.
Company's sale is oriented in an intricate market. We have equipped a complex of tenement houses in Moscow.
Hotel
Hotels in highlands of worldwide known ski areas are operational with our products.
Variety of materials, high developed technology and possibility of decorative additions are making production of different products possible.
Quality colors that are environmentally friendly give you a long term protection of our products which have years of guarantee.
Different color casts make creative architecture and new attractive possibilities.
Notranja oprema – furniture
Modern tourist settlements at Croatian shore are equipped with shutters, that fit the environment there.
Windows in combination of wood and aluminum are a perfect solution for demanding buyers.
RUSSIA –NORTH -EAST
An excellent thermal and sound insulation makes possible building in windows in all climate circumstances.
Production complex and offices are located in center of Logitech. We have representatives in other countries that are distributing our products all over the world. |
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