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keroro Banned
Joined: 15 May 2006 Posts: 6
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:45 pm Post subject: Here is a poem I wrote in class today. |
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Here is a poem I wrote in class today.
Should i smile because
we are friends?
Should i smile because
I have someone to talk to?
Should i smile because
you care for me?
Should i smile because
you understand?
Should i smile because
I love you?
Should i cry because
we'll never be more than "just friends"?
Should i cry because
You dont feel the same way?
Should i cry because
I want to hold you
Should i cry because
I want you to be mine
Should i cry because
I love you?
Tell me what you think please |
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thecharts Grandmaster Poster
Joined: 31 Dec 2005 Posts: 279
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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Very creative- i reckon you should make a move on this special someone who you so obviously care for- then eaither way you will know whether they do or don't feel the same way. Its better knowing, than bvottling these thoughts inside. Even if they don't feel the same way, at least you gave it a shot- its better than that empty feeling of wondering!!
let us know how you go. |
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lh901121 Novice Poster
Joined: 13 May 2006 Posts: 30
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DreamThief Forum Regular

Joined: 21 Aug 2005 Posts: 398 Location: Belgrade, Serbia
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 5:27 am Post subject: |
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Should not this topic be in Authors' Auditorium forum or somewhere else? _________________ Carpe diem... carpe noctem!
Regards,
DreamThief |
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Wick Adept Poster
Joined: 22 Aug 2005 Posts: 64 Location: UK England
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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hey! thats my poem, u copied it....
and lh901121's reply |
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