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commonsense Penguin Army Publishing

Joined: 09 Nov 2004 Posts: 2039 Location: between time and timbuktu
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Lyth Server Ninja

Joined: 13 Nov 2004 Posts: 1644 Location: Socorro, New Mexico, USA
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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The logo does not contrast well with the tiled wood background, you may either want to change the color of the logo, or contrast it against its own background where it's easy to read (like white, for example). I like the unique layout, despite its simplicity, you don't see this everyday. _________________ I talk to the rain |
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Duck Pinko Liberal Communist

Joined: 21 Dec 2004 Posts: 1558 Location: Canada
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Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:02 pm Post subject: |
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I don't like the background. I can't really say what you should do with it, but the wood just looks gaudy to me. One of the images is broken (second on the bottom row), but that's easy to fix. And I'm sorry, but I wouldn't buy a t-shirt from a site that eschews text links in favor of a drop-down menu. It doesn't really look professional.
I think it needs a bit of work. On the plus side, the CSS looks fine on a mac running firefox. _________________ [img:d156d322f3]http://seriousbusiness.l2p.net/img/seriousbanner.gif[/img:d156d322f3]
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Logan Mr. Grayscale

Joined: 01 Mar 2005 Posts: 2343 Location: Virginia
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 11:02 am Post subject: |
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| Duck wrote: | | I think it needs a bit of work. On the plus side, the CSS looks fine on a mac running firefox. |
There's not one line of CSS on the whole thing.
The background is kinda annoying and the logo looks really wierd with the background. I would say switch to CSS, but it's hard to do this with CSS if your not good at it. It just needs some work. _________________ [img]http://imgkit.com/Logan/beethoven-f.png[/img]
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commonsense Penguin Army Publishing

Joined: 09 Nov 2004 Posts: 2039 Location: between time and timbuktu
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 1:04 pm Post subject: |
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Logans right there isnt any css, its just html and tables.
I am trying to learn css so I can redo it in that because a certain friend of mine threw a fit because i used tables. So if anyone one has any tips on how to do what i did with tables in css, Id be grateful.
I guess the wood does look a little gaudy Ill try a more simpler one. and the logo is just a place holder until an ETC shirt comes in and i can take a pic of a model wearing it. _________________ [img:764bf48b96]http://penguinarmy.org/blueleetpengborder.gif[/img:764bf48b96] |
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