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I don't think that's really an abstractism peice. Abstractism is a movement that looks more like surrealism, but more abstract and not related to the sublime and dreams.
This is more like a digital abstraction.
Now on with the comments:
Her face looks too blurry, or just not sharp enough versus the super diagnols and triangular shapes. There's also no harmony among the angles you are using so it creates a very tense feeling.
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| I think you should blend the fractals (not sure if that is the right word) on the right side of her face and possibly on her left shoulder a bit more too. |
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| I like it and how it says alba on the side in the little block - it looks not too faded but just to the right amount. I like the colors and it's very nice. |
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logistikal
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| drath wrote: | I don't think that's really an abstractism peice. Abstractism is a movement that looks more like surrealism, but more abstract and not related to the sublime and dreams.
This is more like a digital abstraction.
Now on with the comments:
Her face looks too blurry, or just not sharp enough versus the super diagnols and triangular shapes. There's also no harmony among the angles you are using so it creates a very tense feeling. |
whoa buddy , this isnt music , its called graphics. thanks for the comment but i cant take them seriously because
1. i dont understand what harmony is
2. it seems you know nothing about art
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Kovacs
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| logistikal wrote: | | drath wrote: | I don't think that's really an abstractism peice. Abstractism is a movement that looks more like surrealism, but more abstract and not related to the sublime and dreams.
This is more like a digital abstraction.
Now on with the comments:
Her face looks too blurry, or just not sharp enough versus the super diagnols and triangular shapes. There's also no harmony among the angles you are using so it creates a very tense feeling. |
whoa buddy , this isnt music , its called graphics. thanks for the comment but i cant take them seriously because
1. i dont understand what harmony is
2. it seems you know nothing about art |
I just have to laugh at point 2.  |
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I am able to see the silver paper you used as background. As people told you in the other signature".hack" try to"hide those if you can't make your own in photoshop. Until now the best is the one with halo (the one that you are currentily using). Try to add more colours to it. If I watch it a few seconds I got bored of it. Don't mind this as a critic...I mean you can but try to fix the following things I wrote up. I give you an 8/10.
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drath
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| logistikal wrote: | | drath wrote: | I don't think that's really an abstractism peice. Abstractism is a movement that looks more like surrealism, but more abstract and not related to the sublime and dreams.
This is more like a digital abstraction.
Now on with the comments:
Her face looks too blurry, or just not sharp enough versus the super diagnols and triangular shapes. There's also no harmony among the angles you are using so it creates a very tense feeling. |
whoa buddy , this isnt music , its called graphics. thanks for the comment but i cant take them seriously because
1. i dont understand what harmony is
2. it seems you know nothing about art |
You just contridicted yourself there, you say I know nothing about art, yet you don't even know what harmony is. I'm currently in my bachelors degree course in visual communication. I think I may know a lot more than you, sorry. And I have no clue what you are talking about half the time, what does music have to do with anything?
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| Seyeko wrote: | You could put her face on a piece of used toilet paper and i'd still think its beautiful  |
hahaha yeah you are right .. but i prefer her on large door poster  |
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good job! I like it!
Maybe because I love jessica alba |
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