My Few New Pieces Of Work

DAaron · Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 12:29 pm Post subject: My Few New Pieces Of Work

Hi I Though Illd Post and share some of my work with people seeing as i beeing commeting on others i want you to comment on me.
This Logo was For Someones Avater For A Clan Called -=GTS=-
[img:1964ad928f]http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h102/AaronWork/logo-2.gif[/img:1964ad928f]
For A Website OF My Mates:
[img:1964ad928f]http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h102/AaronWork/under.png[/img:1964ad928f]
Picture Of My Uncle as A Hamster (Messying Around)
[img:1964ad928f]http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h102/AaronWork/tonyinthejungle.jpg[/img:1964ad928f]
A Drawing i Done About a month ago Im not that good at Drawing:
[img:1964ad928f]http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h102/AaronWork/drawing.jpg[/img:1964ad928f]

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drath · D Joined: 27 Sep 2005 Posts: 1699 Location: Canada

1) What exactly did you do to the first one. I know you didn't render that Desert Eagle, so basically you just added the text? Even so, the text is very awkward there, It would probably work more underneath the barrel or behind the handle, angled upwards (not on the graphic itself).

2) Probably the most decent thing on your list. There needs to be a lot more tracking in between your letters though. Look at the green border of your type mashing into the other letters. It also creates bad negative space between the letters. Maybe put the border on the inside of the letters instead of the outside, or maybe just a bit on outside, and the rest on the inside.

3) MSPAINT? Silly

4) POKEMON?

Not being mean or harsh, just being honest Smile

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Scott · Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 7:36 pm Post subject:

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DAaron · Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 3:47 pm Post subject:

No Its A Neopet Smile

Anyways I Done This Like A Month Ago All In Adobe Photoshop, And The Logo Was Somthing For My Ex Amercias Army Clan To Use.
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marinaroz · Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:19 pm Post subject:

It's not particularly advanced stuff, but I believe you'll learn with some time.

My favorite here is your hamster uncle, though you should try to blend the head more seamlessly into the picture, make it look like it belongs there and not just pasted on top of a photo. It's funny, though, and I like it.
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Ayana · Master Poster Joined: 04 Nov 2006 Posts: 205

I like the neopet one, but i like the website one the best.

It looks better than the others. The text on the first one looks out of place. At first i though you had made the gun youslf to but it looks more like its been cut out of another image.

The head on the hamster one doesn't look right.
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DAaron · Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 12:34 am Post subject:

Thanks For Your Replys Guys and Girls And Ayana That Gun Was Quick Some Clan Need It Just For Temp.
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