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cutmywrists
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Joined: 21 May 2005
Posts: 25
PostPosted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 1:22 pm    Post subject: New Poem Reply with quote
Eternity
You're always in my heart
You know that's the truth
We had a bad start
Till we went to the checkout booth

You think I'll forget about you
I wouldn't even attempt that
I love you, You love me too
Stop loving you, that chance is fat.

You make me smile
You don't hide your identity
To see you, I'd walk 400 and so mile
Together we are for ETERNITY!
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cherii
Master Poster


Joined: 30 Jul 2005
Posts: 173
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 12:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I like the second paragraph. It's a very sweet and romantic poem, good job. I don't know what's mising though, I know there is something missing. Oh well.
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Joshua2100
choochoo!!


Joined: 17 Aug 2005
Posts: 675
Location: Brisbane, Australia
PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 12:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
thats very.. good
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RohitMalhotra
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Joined: 14 May 2005
Posts: 852
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 12:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Nice poem ... Laughing

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