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[vettas]

[img:807bc6e82a]http://images1.filecloud.com/538077/1Girl_4.png[/img:807bc6e82a]

[spock]

It's nice, except the chin seems to be a bit jagged. But otherwise, outstanding work :O
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[Scott]

It looks great, except I think the hand looks really strange, the hand on the right has one huge finger and the one on the left looks just odd, I'm not really sure exactly what is wrong it just looks messed.
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[marinaroz]

It's a good looking picture, but not as good as your other works that I've seen. As been pointed out it has some irregularities. The chin looks strange, both hands are uneven, the hair looks unattached (I absolutely love that hair in all other aspects) and the neck is also kind of strange. I'd say you're really good at drawing, but this picture needs just a bit more tweaking to work the kinks out.
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[drath]

Honestly speaking, I think this is one of your weakest drawings that you posted. It seems like you're going in reverse almost . Anyways, everything that I loved about the third girl "Girl_3" topic is gone in this one. The composition is very bland in this one, the background leaves much to be desired (although the very top where the white shines into her hair looks amazing, great job!), and the linework is kind of shoddy.

The linework seems rushed and not considered as some lines seems blocky and not blended (still have grey tone and pixelated).

The greatest disappointment in this one is her hands. Those do not look like her hands at all! They are quite blocky and unproportioned for one, and secondly they are different sizes from each other. It just looks weird for lack of a better word.

Generally speaking though, the rest is decent.
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[Camilu]

Fa, that divine that effect! That image is very good The effect is average stranger, but am good, I likes as the hair is mixed with the bottom