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Poem: That Which is done

 
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Vipralion
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 4:36 pm    Post subject: Poem: That Which is done Reply with quote

Ever feel this?

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That Which is Done

It's supposed to be the greatest day
The most memorable moment of the year
Yet try as I might, I cannot rid myself what I did
I keep saying it wasn't my fault, my mind wasn't clear

This shouldn't be happening but onward I must
I smile at the camera all the while hiding my tears
But deep inside I know, and ask myself
How much longer can I suppress these fears?

Was what I did really so bad? So Wrong?
Can I forgive myself for what's been done?
Thinking back I don't know what went wrong
What we were doing was only for fun

Finally, I know what to do
I must never forget or be doomed
That which I've done is unforgivable
Never to scar but to bleed an eternal wound.
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Steph1
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 5:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is so beautiful. You're a great poet Smile
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Vipralion
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 4:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank You Very Much!

I really appreciate that!
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Jim Colyer
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 10:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice!
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Vipralion
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PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2006 5:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Geez, re-reading that makes it sound like I ran over someone on the way to a dance or something.

So ya'll's know, this poem isn't about me or anyone I know really. I know it's about something. But you'll have to interpret that for yourself because I wrote it for you.
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