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spock iSpock

Joined: 23 Mar 2005 Posts: 2881 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 3:54 am Post subject: Signature |
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I'm not going to use this signature on LLP (It's to big according to the rules) I'd like some comments on it..
[img:c5f66cc630]http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/531/siggirl3pz2.jpg[/img:c5f66cc630]
I'd really like to improve my moderate graphics skills So any criticism is appreciated. _________________ Spock's blog
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Yo Novice Poster

Joined: 26 Nov 2006 Posts: 25
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Posted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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| It looks good but, I dont like the text so much... it´s only my opinion. But the rest of your work looks very goog, congratulations! |
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spock iSpock

Joined: 23 Mar 2005 Posts: 2881 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 2:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Yo wrote: | | It looks good but, I dont like the text so much... it´s only my opinion. But the rest of your work looks very goog, congratulations! |
Thanks.. So what should I do to make my text better? _________________ Spock's blog
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Yo Novice Poster

Joined: 26 Nov 2006 Posts: 25
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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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| spock wrote: | | Yo wrote: | | It looks good but, I dont like the text so much... it´s only my opinion. But the rest of your work looks very goog, congratulations! |
Thanks.. So what should I do to make my text better? |
I think It could be better whit a 3D text....what do you think? |
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borgleader Forum Regular

Joined: 08 May 2006 Posts: 424
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Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 5:10 pm Post subject: |
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I think your text is relatively fine, I don't know about 3D-ing it. Personnally, I seem to think it would stand out too much or clash with the style that comes out from the rest of your sig.
The only small problem I see with it right now, is that the left part is much brighter than the right part (due to black brushing only appearing on the right part). Other than that it's quite fine. You could try equalizing the brushing and lowering the transparency slightly by maybe 5%.
Just a suggestion though Good job on the overall sig. _________________ [img:bad97b024b]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v58/DarkHunter/PP_Userbar7.gif[/img:bad97b024b]
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LP-Shirl Live for Passion

Joined: 07 Aug 2004 Posts: 5779 Location: U.S. Delaware
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:31 am Post subject: |
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I like it, its very smooth looking and I like the design too.  _________________ "You Cant Keep Going to the Chicken Coop with Blah Blah on Your Mind When All You Have is Hot Sauce in Your Glove Compartment." |
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Kitsune Illusions Novice Poster
Joined: 05 Dec 2006 Posts: 6
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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| It's a nice looking signature, but the text isn't really that good. Nice work. |
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spock iSpock

Joined: 23 Mar 2005 Posts: 2881 Location: The Netherlands
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Kitsune Illusions Novice Poster
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 11:54 am Post subject: |
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| Maybe you could match the color of the text to the background? Like, give the text some orange-red color, and then add a border/stroke to it? I am not too sure if that would work though, but just keep experimenting. |
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dylan2xs Forum Regular
Joined: 12 Jul 2005 Posts: 367
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 7:40 pm Post subject: |
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| everything is perfect.. i like the colors and the smooth looking ..good work i wish i could do something like that. |
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Blahdeedoo Adept Poster

Joined: 24 Oct 2006 Posts: 60 Location: Ardsley, NY
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prownced glitter

Joined: 18 Mar 2005 Posts: 576 Location: over the rainbow
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 11:39 am Post subject: |
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Nice job, I really like the color scheme and the way you've done the background. But I've also got a few minor suggestions. First of all, for some reason the signature looks kind of unbalanced to me, and moving the girl over to the right (only a very little bit) may balance it a bit better. Also, the thick stripe of yellowish color may look better if you moved it closer to the left edge of the graphic. And maybe you could add an overlay color or something to the girl to make her stand out more?
I was being kind of picky, but it's a well done signature. ^_^ _________________ Meow. |
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HD Lifeless Person

Joined: 04 Feb 2006 Posts: 513 Location: Romania
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Skittles www.buddyhut.com

Joined: 08 Feb 2005 Posts: 749 Location: Windsor Locks, CT
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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I like everything but the text. I dont like the color or the font. The font seems to cartoonish for my tase, and the color seems to pop too much cause its bright, maybe darken it a tidbit. _________________ [img:0e7fb8ac65]http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/972/bellatrixsigfm5.jpg[/img:0e7fb8ac65] |
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euphoriae Experienced Poster
Joined: 10 Dec 2006 Posts: 56
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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| It's pretty good. Like the people above, I suggest changing the color of the text to one that will blend better with the background. All in all, it's pretty sweet. |
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