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Song - Tonight

 
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ladymacbex
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 10:49 am    Post subject: Song - Tonight Reply with quote

This is more autobiographical than originally intended, but I think it worked out pretty well.

Got up early on a Sunday
slept my life away that night
got a frantic phone call Monday
and that brings us to tonight
and all the words that I just can't let go of
all the emotions I can't get control of

My heart is racing and my knees are weak
my mind is raging though I cannot speak
inside a battle for a better life
and I think it's gonna be
(I think it's gonna be, yeah)
I think it's gonna be a long, long night

It's a shallow life I'm living
locked inside a world of change
with all the time that I've been given
I probably should have changed my ways
these are going by and I'm still empty
ignoring everything that tries to tempt me

I want to live
I wanna live, I wanna live, I wanna live

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats really good, I actually started hearing music while I was reading it. Good job Wink
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